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kipi91212

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This doesn't sound anything like Dash

Atlantic War!? really good name though
0:00 - 0:06 really fire intro, but 0:07 - 0:13 you disappointed the audience by making it calmer.
This didn't really use that many TFotS elements, but it's reasonable considering that you don't even have the mscz file of TFotS :)
Also, you should've taken more advantage of the fire melody. This is too chill.

I appreciate your key changes, but personally I think you should study some music theory.
1:09 reminds me of Jumper

Still the same style as always, but the melody sounds really fire. I feel like you could've used some more electronic instruments and more upbeat drums.
1:07 the chord is off, also heavier drums would work here
My ranking: 1st place in all of your 21 audios. Keep up the good work!

ExplosivePickaxe responds:

Yes I intentionally came and responded late cuz now I have 29 and about to have 30 audios... :))

ofc @Sombodyunknow and @thepresentbulder knows :) also I suggested the J part

idk but keep making music and someday someone will scout you :)

In my opinion, 0:14 - 0:54 is the best part.
The use of the Choir Synthesizer in the first 14 seconds can be improved (for e.g. change D to G and G to A). The piano around 0:11 has some awkward notes, you should probably shift them a bit.
Yeah overall it’s a pretty nice song. If you don’t really want to improve the intro then level creator would probably crop out the intro (no offense, but honestly).

EDIT: I helped him fixing the some stuff so no more complain

Definitely your best audio yet. However, the first half has some awkward notes, idk if that's intentional or not, but if it's not, it kinda ruins the flow. But overall this piece is really good!

Kwabzy responds:

Omg thank you! I wanted to make it really unnerving and unorthodox harmonies for enhanced creepiness and absurdity.

I really love the calmness and chill of this song! This audio would surely be popular in the future!

Hi :) I’m kipi91212. I've been playing the piano for 8 years and recently started posting good-quality music made in Musescore. My music are pretty arbitrary, melody-based, and often energetic with a lot of instruments.
Btw tysm @Nucleon25 for scouting me

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